Tuesday, May 29, 2007

Heaven in making..!!

Once upon a time
When angels and demons were friends,
They sang happy songs,
Feasted together n had a ball,
Seeing them together,
Was a delightful sight,
There wasn’t no heaven or hell,
It was so miraculous,
And there was nothing ,
That could ring a bell

But there was jealousy spawning,
In a demon’s head,
Though he bejeweled his hatred,
Under numerous charades,
He was disgusted by,
The beauty angels possessed.

So the demon was,
Enumerating various plans,
To sabotage and maim
The angels for once n for all.

The angels unaware,
Of the evil ahead,
Were happy in thier neverland,
Dwelling harmoniously,
With their demon friends.

The damned demon seeded,
His envy in others as well,
And waited for it to season,
So that he could commence,
His forbidden plans.

N then the day came,
When mayhem broke,
Love got sordid,
N trust poked.

Angels and demons
Fought in glory,
A battle fiercely gory,
The demons wronged angels
For an inculcated distrust.

The demons fought,
With all their physical strength,
But couldn’t overpower
the goodness angels had.

After the battle the angels
Were vehemently mightier
N told demons to move,
To a different land….
n coz o this, today…. The beautiful heaven stands..!!

9 comments:

aravind said...

interesting ideas....
nice dun....keep it up...
keep pennin..!!!!

cheerio
aravind.

Anonymous said...

why?????i mean why would you do this to your post.....????
for gods sake change your display name this could bring you severe censure....
MANN RAI

SePuLcHeR said...

hmmmmmmmm.............


wondering...............

Sunaina said...

THats actually really well written ...did u write it?

Isaac A Christopher said...

tats a good one :)m cool , I guess it is the way biblical describes the fallen angel or devil named Lucifer... only thing in urs is the devil has ugliness to it ... Nah it is all the Man's way of seein it I guess...

bornfortheu.s.a said...

hmm...nice...one of my poems on the same topic...

http://soulintoxicated.blogspot.com/2007/05/fallen-angel.html

Supriya Vohra said...
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Supriya Vohra said...

i like zis one ze best....everyhting abt us can be reduced to zis eternal fight btw the angel n the demon....dunno where u got yer inspiration frm but its fookin brilliant:)

blinded blue teddy said...

Neat!