Lyk ne otha gurl….she was full o desires n dreams..
Walkin down d street…thinking o a fren she hd to meet.
But it was getting dark n late…so she thought o avoidin her mate
Hurryin back home in worry….
Al o a sudden…a car stops…
D nxt thing she knoes…shes dragged in…
Her screams fill d air…but no one hears..
The door closes…d car races…on a ride
Wid d innocent inside..
Dey force demselves into her…
Ova n ova again..despite d cries
She pleads…… Mercy! Mercy!
But d devils don’t care
Shes vociferating, but shes nt spared
And den wat seemed an eternity…shes thrown off d car
Wid multiple scars..both on body n soul
N dere dey go on d roll
She tries to move…but shes trampled by pain
Alas! her efforts r in vain
There she lies not knowing what to do
Shes plunged into darkness..too maddening to b known
She wakes up in a hospital bed…
Wid ppl al around her…al eyes filled wid…pity, loathe n blame
She closes her eyes tryin to escape d shame
Her mind contemplatin d life ahead…
A life o neverendin agony…coupled wid her unrequited dreams..
She prays dat her end shld b near…
Coz sympathy is wat she cant bear..
Irony is, everyone around..talks o justice…
Wen d bastards r out…Scott free…
On sum otha Heinous spree…
Oh lord…wen ll she b heard?
I reckon..never!!
For creeps it was jus sex….for her a kind o death…
For us jus anotha case o rape…
Sum ll see it..othas ll giv it a miss….coz most o us think..dis is how d condition is…
A piece o news for al o us..dat ll go stale in a while…but trust me..dat gurl ll neva smile!!
7 comments:
great efforts to dot down the agony and misery of a girl who went thru this trauma and a nice topic to write abt.... i totally agree that we all noe that injustice is being done but still not able to do anything.... the best thing i liked in ur blog was the last line... it will become a news and then stale but that girl will never smile..... great job!!... i really hope that people get human and stop this intolerable act vch can leave a victim in pain and sorrows....
its such a piece of writing which shall enhance the mental acumen of every being..esp in our society where such things are a hamartia..a nice and thought evoking read!
a very soulful work..truly brings out the agony that a female goes thru during and after this henious act....it also brings out the shit that is so omnipresent and yet goes unnoticed...good work...keep the momentum goin...and not to forget very eloquent and rhyming indeed..hehehe...
mann rai
u must have heard bout abstract photography.....
well ur writing has a taste of abstract writing.....with a essage....
good work
truth simplified....
a nice effort to actually pen it down......take a step further and stick it down at a place where ppl actually read,,,n understand and make a conscious effort towards the cause!!
and not to mention....uv put that down beautifully.
great gng girl
hope to c more n more of nice stuff from ya
muaaah :)
ohh man.i am flattered.......speechless , nothing to say more.......yaar , i was numbed.......awsoem.......
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