Livin on a prayer
Tryin to b fair
Sittin in despair
Wanting al dats nt dere
Wretchedness isn’t wat u can share
Its clandestine n u hv to bear
Wen prayers go unheard
A virtue, patience is still dere
Being a fugitive tks ya nowhere
It leave ya tainted n noone cares
M al weary o d masks ppl wear
Coz its hard to see thru such layers
Prayers for life or livin on a prayer
Sins can neva b spared..!!
Tryin to b fair
Sittin in despair
Wanting al dats nt dere
Wretchedness isn’t wat u can share
Its clandestine n u hv to bear
Wen prayers go unheard
A virtue, patience is still dere
Being a fugitive tks ya nowhere
It leave ya tainted n noone cares
M al weary o d masks ppl wear
Coz its hard to see thru such layers
Prayers for life or livin on a prayer
Sins can neva b spared..!!
7 comments:
an exquisite piece of poetry...i really lyked it truely wonderful...the way u wrote it is commendable..keep writin...will love to read u..
welll ..... just speechless for a moment !!
awesome work lady
** bows down **
know wat..i chanced upon your url on orkut and randomly decided 2 check it out..read 'the unheard'...it bears an uncanny resemblance to EXACTLY wat happened to me..without replacin a single word,emotion..n ironically my breakdown happened around this tym too.. they say 'love happens' ya kno..n sumtymes..jus sum fkin tymes it leaves ya scarred...lessay this guy..the onli one who hurt me bad is d one i sadly loved truly...anyhoww..m outtta it n flirting with life like i always have...but this is sumfin i won 4get.
sweet....!!!
real sweet....!!!
Well quite nice... i really liked it .........really do not have anything to criticise this time......
decent piece of poetry.....tho i like it coz of its essence n the honesty that oozes out of the words.....but isnt it toooooooooooooooo rhyming imean twinkle twinkle little star
how i wonder what you are...
beautifully written..vry well thought out!
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