A love that was born so strong But was forced to die Till all the signs were out of sight It took you a minute And me a life to come out of all the mess you left behind!!
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I've been a great admirer of your writing craft!..even short and simple words like these say a world of things-now that's what great minds and humble hearts are capable of.. you're now on the zenith level! Accolades :D
the last two lines are unnecessary....to come out ki zaroorat nahi hai, tuney upar same cheez hi boli hai. i think it should end with it took you a minute and me a life. clipped. and brilliant.
4 comments:
I've been a great admirer of your writing craft!..even short and simple words like these say a world of things-now that's what great minds and humble hearts are capable of.. you're now on the zenith level!
Accolades :D
that's really beautifully put down..sums it up in the least.
cheers!
the last two lines are unnecessary....to come out ki zaroorat nahi hai, tuney upar same cheez hi boli hai. i think it should end with it took you a minute and me a life.
clipped. and brilliant.
Point taken!
Thanks love!
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