When the space is wide
Between your heart and mine
There is so much that
you could have done to make it fine
And then you say you did....so much for me
But i didn't let you in
Is it so baby..??
Y didn't you try and knock again
I was waiting and i still am
For you to come and tell me
that things will be alright
that you are still there by my side
You admit to your faults
But have you ever thought of correcting them all
No baby you dont want me
All you want is yourself only
its too early for you to feel the pain
And when you will it will be too late
I have loved you and i always will
But its hard to wait till eternity!!!!
9 comments:
Nice Read..
:)
hey bhawika....
seriously...i think i can defntly say this is the best thing uve written so far...
but then again...i tend to say that evry time i read ur poems... :)
llloovvedd it!!!!!!!
its very situational...
that was me SHWETA !!!!!!!!!!
muah...
another wonderful piece of writing.
keep giving others a chance of reading such beautiful stuff!!
tk cr
besties
its rare to come across such blogs, words entangles in a medley of emotions. a beautifully written piece.
- The Sleeper
sorry i've been late in recognising ur potential..!!.
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